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REVISED OUTLINE: Rough Draft Thesis –Romeos impulsive actions impacted not only himself, but those closest to him. Body Paragraph #2 Title – Romeo's actions --TS: Throughout the movie Romeo's actions effect everyone, although he does not realize it. --CD #1 Title - Trying to escape from his own reality --CD #2 Title – saving himself --CD #3 Title- seeing his mistakes Body Paragraph #1 Title – Romeo and Mercutio interactions/effects --TS: Romeo's actions have a huge effect on Mercutio, Romeo's best friend --CD #1 Title – a helping hand --CD #2 Title – depression --CD #3 Title- Realization
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